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Love is…

The stroke of a soft cheek.
A blush.
The sound of another’s heart beat.
A gasp.
The feeling of their hair in your hands.
A smile.
The brush of fingers against their back.
A shiver.
The telling of secrets and stories.
A laugh.
The apology of a hidden lie.
A cry.
The pair of lips pressed against a scar.
A tear.
The sight of watching them sleep.
A sigh.
The softness of their voice.
A song.
The warmth of being held close
A dance.
The sharing of an ice cream cone.
A taste.
The quilt around two cold bodies.
A touch.
The caring of their aching cough.
A fever.
The confession of one’s feelings.
A hug.
The shakiness as they kneel.
A blink.
The box with the ring inside.
A kiss.
I dunno... something I wrote in creative writing... I was in a lovey dovey mood... I showed it to my mom and she gave me this look: :love: and said, "Awwww!!!" So I guess it must be good. :XD:

This is to all couples, lovers, those in love and those who want to be loved... a little poem just for you. :aww:
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Kat--The--Cat Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I hope you don't mine, i made it into a little pic...  NaNoEmo day 23 - Scared 


i DID credit you

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shershired1 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's quite beautiful, fills one with a sense of well, love. It's adorable. And it's hopeful.
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bluecheeks Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Professional Filmographer
I feel so loved some how... Great job! :D
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Kikolyne Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
May i use your poem in a video im making? I'll credit you.
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
As long as you credit me and send me a link, of course!

I'm very flattered by this! :blush:
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Kikolyne Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really? Thanks ill be sure to credit you! would you like me to send you a link once its up?
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh yes, please!
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Kikolyne Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok great! [link]
It really isnt that great but i think it came out better than planned... Thank you for letting me use your poem! :)
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's a very lovely video with a very sweet song. :)
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Kikolyne Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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Jouzhenkyn Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
This is absolutely fantastic!
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TheStoryNeverEnds Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I LOVE IT!! :love: This is fantastic!
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much! :)
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PhoenixScribe Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2011  Student Writer
Your mom is right: it is good! I love this poem.
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
XDDDD My mom is awesome. :D Thanks though!
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Bandbaby18 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2011
Its Beautiful.
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, thank you so much. :)
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Amber1142 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2009  Student Writer
That is sooooooooooooooo CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, thank you very much! :D
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idreaminglasscolor Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my goodness! I freakin' love this! Oh man! It's so great, i think you did just the best job!
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Oh really? Wow, thank you very much! XD It means so much to me to hear people like this... thank you so much! :hug:
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idreaminglasscolor Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I loved it, one of my favorites of the day. Great job. ^^
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Oh wow! XD Favorite of the day... sweet! :D
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idreaminglasscolor Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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Kitsunemisao Featured By Owner May 18, 2009
Awww how lovely and sweet <3
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner May 18, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it. :hug:
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noroisohma Featured By Owner May 17, 2009
Hana...I don't think I've ever read a poem that has made me cry like this. What a way to capture such an emotion. It's amazing how lonely it makes me feel...
Awsome job.
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
O_O WHY DOES EVERYTHING I WRITE MAKE PEOPLE CRY!?!

Sorry... I'm glad you like it... I really am... I was in a romantic mood so yeah... ^-^ I'm so glad you love it... thanks. :hug:
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Shebby2007 Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Professional General Artist
Very, very nice!!! =D Pretty, too. =3 Gwah, I has a crush. =) So this is extra special. =3

AND BLAST IT IF EVERYTHING I LOOK AT NOW DOESN'T MAKE ME WANNA BASH MY HEAD AGAINST MY SCREEN 'CAUSE IT REMINDS ME OF HIM!! :pissed:

<.<; ;>.>XD Nah, it's all good. XD
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
You has a crush!?! Dawwwww... :love:

O_O No worries... I know how you feel... and you know what? That boy I always thought of... ended up being my boyfriend. >w<
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Shebby2007 Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Professional General Artist
Yes, and I have absolutely no idea WHY I have a crush on the boy I do! It's weird. xD

Thanks. XD Really? AWESOME!! =D That's great. =3 I'm just confused 'cause this is the first serious crush I've had. I act normal around him (which is weird enough on it's own), and he actually doesn't mind! It almost bugs me. XD
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
No worries... I guess it's just fate? XD

It was the same for me! He thought I was cute when I was acting myself. XD Which is silly and a little perverted... we even had a long conversation about what's in Spam! LOL If he likes you for who you are... HE'S A KEEPER!
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Shebby2007 Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Professional General Artist
I dunno!! Kinda hope so, though. XD


That's weird!! =3 XD XD That's definitely different.. Conversations about spam can lead in many different directions, huh? XD I figure so! =D It's just so strange to me. XD He's not the kind of guy I figured I'd end up liking. He's a complete nut, he's always making me laugh (I swear, looking at him makes me laugh, and not because he looks funny. XD), and he's just.. Weird. XD
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Same... XD

That's a good thing! When I look or even think about him, I burst into a fit of giggles and smile... my friends are all so confused. XD XD XD If he makes you laugh just by thinking of him... it's a good thing, trust me. :)
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Shebby2007 Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Professional General Artist
Yay! =3

Glad to hear it. ^^ XD XD Same here. xD He's gonna end up getting me in trouble one day because of making me laugh. xD I just can't seem to stop. ^^; Yay! =D Good things are awesome =3
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I don't see that as a bad thing. XD Good things are very awesome... you'll learn to control it, trust me. :D
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Miyazaki-A2 Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Student General Artist
Oh, this was so wonderful, Hana! It makes me just giggle and go "AWWW!!" Y'know? It's very well-written, and I love the rhythm.

Plus, the thought of all those things you just listed there made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. So I guess you did your job, right?

Anyway, beautiful work. :heart:
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Daaawwww... thanks so much. >w< I love it, too. XD

I love making people feel all warm and fuzzy inside. SUCCESS!!! 0w0

Merci! :D
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Miyazaki-A2 Featured By Owner May 19, 2009  Student General Artist
Heehee, you're welcome, huuuun. *applaudes your success* :clap:
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner May 19, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, thank you... :bow:
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Hitomi-no-Envy Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Student General Artist
:heart:
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
You like it, I'm guessing?
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Hitomi-no-Envy Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Student General Artist
yes~
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Sandwich-Man Featured By Owner May 17, 2009
Love is not a feeling, but more of actions to show your affection... Just depicted as what you have listed here! It makes me go "D'aww..." and it also makes me feel lonely. ;.;

No no no, don't worry 'bout me. I has friends and I'm fine with that right now. :XD: Interestingly enough at Church, we had a guest and him talking about marriage as the subject for the teaching. Really nice and devoted stuff there...

Speaking of marriage... HOLY CRAP, HYRAYL! YOU GOT ENGAGED?! :omg:
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HyrAyl Featured By Owner May 17, 2009
I do hope that means you're happy for me.... he he he....
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Sandwich-Man Featured By Owner May 17, 2009
Oh but of course! It's awesome news to hear! :)
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HyrAyl Featured By Owner May 17, 2009
Thank you.... it means a lot to me.
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
You know, you make a very good point at that... truth is, I didn't even realize that I was writing that until you pointed it out! XD I'm a dork...

Love is one of the greatest things ever and some day, I hope you find the perfect girl. :aww:

I KNOW!!! I AM SO HAPPY FOR HIM!!! :excited:
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Sandwich-Man Featured By Owner May 17, 2009
That's what Raquel, my Youthgroup teacher constantly says. "Love is not a feeling! It's not, 'Oh, he's the one, I can just feel it!'" So yeah, sure does stick in my head. :P

One day... One day. :XD:
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Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Your Youth Group teacher knows love very well then. XD
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