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Love is…

The stroke of a soft cheek.
A blush.
The sound of another’s heart beat.
A gasp.
The feeling of their hair in your hands.
A smile.
The brush of fingers against their back.
A shiver.
The telling of secrets and stories.
A laugh.
The apology of a hidden lie.
A cry.
The pair of lips pressed against a scar.
A tear.
The sight of watching them sleep.
A sigh.
The softness of their voice.
A song.
The warmth of being held close
A dance.
The sharing of an ice cream cone.
A taste.
The quilt around two cold bodies.
A touch.
The caring of their aching cough.
A fever.
The confession of one’s feelings.
A hug.
The shakiness as they kneel.
A blink.
The box with the ring inside.
A kiss.
I dunno... something I wrote in creative writing... I was in a lovey dovey mood... I showed it to my mom and she gave me this look: :love: and said, "Awwww!!!" So I guess it must be good. :XD:

This is to all couples, lovers, those in love and those who want to be loved... a little poem just for you. :aww:
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Kat--The--Cat Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I hope you don't mine, i made it into a little pic...  NaNoEmo day 23 - Scared 

i DID credit you

shershired1 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's quite beautiful, fills one with a sense of well, love. It's adorable. And it's hopeful.
bluecheeks Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Professional Filmographer
I feel so loved some how... Great job! :D
Kikolyne Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
May i use your poem in a video im making? I'll credit you.
Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
As long as you credit me and send me a link, of course!

I'm very flattered by this! :blush:
Kikolyne Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really? Thanks ill be sure to credit you! would you like me to send you a link once its up?
Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh yes, please!
Kikolyne Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok great! [link]
It really isnt that great but i think it came out better than planned... Thank you for letting me use your poem! :)
Hana-Bakemono Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's a very lovely video with a very sweet song. :)
Kikolyne Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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